Superman,
Can't help but fawn over the poems you right, man. This one was totally sad, but it's hard not to like it! And your welcome for all the comments,lol. It's np at all.
Jules

This poem is really good. The rhyme scheme and flow are great. It's sad, but it has a lot of emotion in it. Keep it up.

I loved the poem..it was touching, and made the tears in my eyes melt with the wonderful ending

-emotions run deep, great poem-

I love this poem i can relate to it and im sure many other people good its so good... i love the way it flows.. great job