Good poem i like this one you show alot of emotion in it. The flow is off in some places but it is still very wonderful. Great job. 5/5

"Emotions fade into absence" i feel apathetic at times. nice work ;-)

Oh wow..that was soo good...keep it up i loved it..ur very talented sorry about what happened to u tho..i do understand..so anyways 5/5

~Bl0oDyAnGeLeYeZ~