Comments : Mother's Gone

  • 17 years ago

    by Chelssღ

    Haha=) Lolle I really liked it!! Soo kute! hehe! I do that all the time..maybe not soo EXTREME...=P But when she got home i Never had the things done like she had asked=S hehe..anywayy! Great job! I really liked it!=) 10/10 =) XoX [Chelss`

  • 17 years ago

    by TheRevelation

    Great job nice laugh 5/5 from me loved it keep it up

  • 17 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    Loved it keep it up and ill keep reading :):)

    would you read my newest poem please? its called The Sacrifice Of Love thnx xxx alex xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by The Queen of Spades

    Lol, cute. good job!

  • 17 years ago

    by Adriana77

    This is really cute! Keep it up!

  • 17 years ago

    by Tormented

    Awwww thats so cute! nice laugh! nice read! nice poem! nice flow! nice rhyme! nice evrything! 5/5
    Keep writing
    And
    Keep Smiling

    -*-Tormented

  • 17 years ago

    by C Cattaway

    Lol.. very true.. Oh, to be younger.. maybe I should get my boys to read this!!!! Well done.. xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Midnight Sun

    LOL! Really good...great mindset for this one...keep up the great work. 5/5
    ~Jules

  • 17 years ago

    by Lu

    This brought back some memories of my childhood ....
    Doing sumersaults on my parents couch....ahahaha.....if they only knew now ..well I do guess it would be OK to tell them now.....lol
    Thanks for sharing this cute little piece dear lady, it has brought back some childhood memories that I had long forgotten .