Hehe.
That's cuuuute.
Very nicely done.

A good idea of comparing the do's and don't of friendship.

You could write dissin' or dissing, have it rhyme and put it in the friendship area where it belongs.

The anti-trust line is hard read and doesn't really work that well, so I would suggest re-writing it and trying to shorten the line to make it fit with the rest of what you have written.

The end is a little weak, a poem shines or fails on it's last line and you can make a better statement about friendship than you have here.

Nice effort.

I really like it, your whole poem is true
and its really well done, i am sure if you'll wrk a bit more on the rhyme the poem will flow easily and will be perfect

but i love it

Hahah, quite right.. friends are all that and so much more.
p.s. I know that you are new, but I might as well warn you that it's against the rules to ask for comments except in forum situated on the discussion board called request comments... but don't worry hun. Keep on writing, practice makes perfect, as they say, and you have quite a bit of talent :-)

//T.L.//

I agree with that. I know how you feel
I've had so many back stabbing,
supposingly friends in my life that its
just plain riddiculous. Your amazing.
I really hope you know how talented
you are. Please don't let your talent
go to waste.

Love
Letty

I really like this...great job!...its soo cute...dissin...lol...i love it!...hope to hear from ya!
byez

That is cute and you must be a good friend cause you what one is but dont get to much.

Very cute
this is so true

Great poem and all that is so true by the way =] 5/5 keep it up.

It's cool and i agree it's true
Keep on writing

The repition in this poem strongly cemented how you wanted the reader to feel. more emotion and meaning was issued.

well done. keep writing please.

5/5 David