I thought i would go through your poems to the lonely ones with no comments. I am suprised that this one has none. It is an amazing poem. Filled with such strong emotion. Your description of everything so well written. I love this:

"I hate you, I hate it, I hate life.
I am pathetic, and I'm a nothing.
A nobody to practically everyone around.
You lie, I lie, everything was a lie right from the start''

PERFECT! Very emotional. This set the poem. By repeating it, it strengthened the poem alot. Excellent job hun. Keep it up, please. =] 5/5