Liked it was really good! 5/5 n although i think its going a bit far to kill them outright (you could just watch them instead while wrecking their lives) i thought it was very good!

This poem was relli good, It was very dark and well written! 5/5

Good job keep it up

I like the way anger was expressed in your poem. and the way you expressed the twisting of the knife, and the stabbing again and again.. it was awesome

Great poem. i love it. im sorry it took me a while to get bak to u.. thanx for the comment on my poem it means alot. htis is an amazing poem. i love it. keep on writing
take care
luve angie

Great 5/5 thanks for your comment on Can she escape her fate