Wow...One of the best Haiku's I've ever read. I normally dislike them, for they are too short for my taste, but I really enjoyed this one..Great job.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

Again, Jessy. This was a beautiful haiku. You word them amazingly. Very nicely done. Keep it up! Ily. 5/5

Natalie``

Wow. Nicely done Jessy, as usual. I loved it. The detail was great, I usually hate Haikus, cause people don't get them to make sense, but I love this one. =]

I am learning alot from your poetry, you are great.

Nice touch!! I appreciate it a lot
I really like short poetry and this one is one of them..
-singko-

Slightly anti-climatic, but I love your word usage.

I love your vocab. I don't usually like short poems very much. But some really catch my eye. This was one of them. Great descriptiveness. Great job =]

Short but beautiful! I usually dont like reading Haikus but you did such a wonderful job how could anyone not? Im really impressed by you! I love how you try all these different styles!! You are a wonderful writer!! 5/5!!

This is another nice poem! but rather short!!!

keep it up! 5/5 for it ;)

Thanks for the comment on my poem it means alot to me!