Interesting theme and style.

I liked the diction even if it felt a little odd in the palindromic return. It's concise, tight and knows exactly what it wants to convey. Which is pleasing. The only thing I would change is the second use of among. This is a very short poem and repitition can become a problem. Personally I think 'within' would be a much better replacement, especially when it comes to the palindromic ending (a poem's end is it's most important part, requiring it to be the strongest line, have a finite statement and leave the reader with a question if possible) of this very mature piece.

I like.

Bret

I like the style to. Its very good. keep it up.

I love the style you used too!i like your choice of words! i haven't written any palindromes but you did an amazing job!5/5
Keep It up
And
Keep Smiling

-*-Tormented

Ohhh! Now I get the style, cool, I just learned something new.^-^ Great job. You seem to like the topic Angels as much as I do:)

Wow, i have never heard of that style of poetry before but it sounds hard!! And you did a perfect job at it!!! I loved the words you used! I might just try to write a palindrome!! Definetly a 5/5!! I wouldnt change a thing!!! Keep it up!!

Thats a very cleaver style, a great job. Good work on the language and imagery! Keep it up!

New style of poetry writing i haven't perviously exprienced great poem

You have mastered the concept of this type of poem, and I found it a joy to read, whilst taking each word, and really understanding it. Very well done indeed. xx

I LOVE this poem, it's very very good! I have never read anything in this style, and it's very neat. I like how you wrote lost at the beginning and end, it really captures the meaning, and the -death- in the middle brings it all together! GREAT! 5/5

I like this style of written poem! but i never wrote one! its hard lol!
loved it
keep it up!

Hmmm. This is really diffrent, diffrent indeed. None the less though, I actually loved it. It thought it was creative, and it made sense. So great work.

Well itz ok n i give u a 4/5 cause it was good but i lost myself will reading it so it got me confused

Never have I tried 'palindrome'
This will be my perfect example of it.
Superb!
5/5

Ohhh!! i liked that very deep u can compare with me poems. but anyways nice poem neatly done and put out well.
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