Another really great! Im adding you to my favs!

I love it as i will

Ooo. I liked the last line. Very original in my point of view. The flow was a bit off in places, but over all it was well done. The idea was great, and well thought up. Keep it up. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

Well you left a really cute comment on one of my poems so i thought i would do the same bk lolz...ur poems is well ace love it to bits xx mwah xx

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i just write up
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Your poetry is getting better and better as I read more. This is my favorite, so far.

I'm not sure what you could do for an ending, but what you have so far works really well-- the stanzas seem to have a constant format.

Great work!!! 5/5

I really loved the ending.
I liked the entire poem, I thought it was very good.

This poem is extreamly cool, n good. keep it up, xxx

This is good ill keep it up 5/5

Ty for the coment =) sory its taken 3 months to get back to u, hanvt been writin at all till just recently, got a couple a newies, rly dif

i love the flow of the first 2 stanzas, 3rd isnt as gud but awsom poem none the less =D