This is a great poem. i loved it!

Oh my gosh this is so good and I can relate to it sooooo much!

Totally cute! i love htis poem and i can totally relate to it...I LOVE IT!!! very well done

Great poem.. I really love it

This one was realyyy good. i am actually in this situation so i can totally relate =) great job

Right on sista! i know what it is like to have some girl all over the one you love so don't loose hope and keep writing!! God bless -erica

I like this one. i like the way you brought all those detailed feelings into this poem. great job :) and thank you for the comment.

Hey you are so good! Thank you so much for commenting on my poem it means so much to me!
Burning~Wings

Great poem loved it

Love the opening line - "sunset and i see his face" great poem!