Comments : The Hospital

  • 17 years ago

    by XxSilentScreamXx

    Its so sad but i really like it.
    Great job.

  • 17 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    Wow!! That poem was excellent. Practically brought tears to my eyes. It was so sweet..but sad. Excellent write.

    && thanks for the comment.

  • 17 years ago

    by TeenXLoveXTragedy

    Wow..just..wow, that is an awesome poem!! you are a really really good writer..great job, keep it up

  • 17 years ago

    by Chelsea

    Wow that is awesome
    that brought tears to my eyes
    you are an amazing writer for 11
    keep the good work up

  • 17 years ago

    by .:bree:.

    This is soo soo good.. it neally brought me to tears. you are an awsome as writer consitering our onli 11.. keep up the exelent work..

  • 17 years ago

    by Dancing On The Ceiling

    Omg another great poem! except this one made me cry! my grandmother died of cancer so i can sort of relate!
    great job
    your like my fav. writer on this site
    maybe because i can relate to most of ur stuff and i have a feeling we have alot in common
    ttyl
    taylor

  • 17 years ago

    by Jess

    This is really good and sad. I love this poem. keep up the good work.
    xoxoxox
    jess

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittany

    Oh i loved it you did an exellent job and anyone who tells you other wise is CRAZY i love it so much i almost cried you did a wonderfull job

  • 17 years ago

    by Silent Screams

    Wow that is so sad...i lost a very close friend one time but i they died because of suicide..anyways great poem
    auna

  • 17 years ago

    by Nicci

    Oh my gosh it is unbelievable that your 11!! that is an amazing poem and it brought tears to my eyes this is amazing!! god has blessed you with an amazing gift girl you should be proud!!

  • 17 years ago

    by MiaFairy

    This poem is very moving. it made me cry. i loved it very much. you have a true talent for showing emotions through writing.

  • 17 years ago

    by ABake

    This is very good and sad ive had a few family members pass away from cancer and its not easy! but this is very sweet and good so keep up the good work!

  • 17 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Very sad. Well done though. To be so young, you do a great job! Keep it up!

  • 17 years ago

    by Avani

    Awww that is very sad. May God bless him.

  • 16 years ago

    by Soul To Squeeze

    It was written very well
    i love it

  • 16 years ago

    by Bee

    Great job

    5/5

    im onli 13 and i write a lot too... i just found this site tho, so yea

    i live in Hopatcong, NJ, which is about a half hour from NY, not including traffic ;-)

    message me, i wold love ta talk to yu, considering there arn't many young writers on this site