A very great poem that i enjoyed reading , but some little mistakes in the typing that you should fix
very nice poem,5/5

Awwwh, that was so cuuute! I loved it, it was adorable.. The flow was pretty good, and the descritpions were just beautiful.. They were full of love and very nicely detailed.. There are grammer and spelling mistakes in it and that lets it down a bit.. Nicely done though 5/5

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Thank you for your comments. Much appreciated. This poem is so cute. Very nice job. Very good discriptions and use of vocab was good =] Keep up the good work.

Awww i liked it... short and sweet... keep writing.. i can tell you love doing it so dont ever stop! :D thx for commenting on my poems... i appreciate it!

~angel~

Beautiful!! i love it
the flow of the poem was great and so was the language used

you have a gift! and its amazing!
keep up the good work!

sarah

I love this one. 5/5 good job

Awh! This one was cuuute. And I don't have any suggestions either. It was short, but sweet. Great job again! Keep it up & take care.

Natalie``

Aww this poem is so cute! the flow was awsome too!!!

keep it up!

Aww this is a really sweet and beautiful poem.
you did such a wonderful job on this.
and the flow was amazing too.
great job! 5/5

~Kristina