That was a great poem! It kept me on edge; i dont know whats gonna happen next so im gonna read the rest of the story.

This one is really good 2, I dont even know what to say

wow brilliant... btw, ima head out ... i wanna know whats next... ciao

So detailed... So good!

(on to part three.)

This story is very good, I can't quit reading it, so I'm off to read the next part~

--Bryce~