This is good, it doesn't really rhyme, but good. thankz for commenting an honest critique

Your poem is good.correct me if I'm wrong but I think it's about love being neglected.and by the way thanks for your comment.It really helps to have someone commenting on your work either good or bad.

Hey, this poem is really good you do have a gift. thanks for commenting on my poem. if you have any feedback or constructive critism for me i'd appreciate it, thanks. - Lola