When you...

by Danielle   Aug 31, 2006


When everyones gone and your all alone.
i feel your pain like bullet to the brain.
when your falling ill be there to save you.
as you sit and watch the world pass you by.
remember you and me were ment to be.
see the roses wilting in the corner.
even as there fading there still beautiful.
see the tear drops in my eyes.
remember you said would never make me cry.
dont worry when im gone just think about me having fun.
stand out in the rain with me and dance around.
i said i love you and i swear i still do.
just remember im here with you.
and when you think its all gone your wrong you still have me....

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  • 17 years ago

    by Heidi

    This poem is promising. it has emotion that's hard to find but we know is there, if you understand what i'm trying to say. It was short & sweeet, which is good. I liked the way it was put together, and i liked the way it only had a few ryhmes. it was good, well thought through, good job.

    heidi may

  • 17 years ago

    by nikkigirl23

    Wow thats a good poem 5/5 keep it up