Aw this poem is very sad but very nice i liked it alot!!! comment on my poems il appreciate it thanks

The poem was alright but it did feel a bt rushed. It had the things that a poem needs: Message, good flow, tragic love, but the fact that you more or less narrate the poem is what felt off about it. It could be just me. The rest of the poem was decent. Also it's two not to in your final line.

Wow that was such a sad poem. It was really nice. keep it up.

That was really but..and it was sad but it was very very super duper lovely! keep up the good work! *gives you 10 stars*
love ya always
~Amber Dawn~

A very sad one, but once again it showes your great talent.

That is so sad! n as i read the emotion just washed over me!!!