Thanks for the comment x
I love your poems... but this one is really sad. I can only imagine what it would be like to lose a child...

4/5.. I really didnt get the feeling like I did with the other ones.

This was good not the best i read! And i also did get what you were meaning before the message at the bottom! I thought the flow was a bit rocky at the end! The rhyming was good tho. Overall i would give this a 4/5 cause i dont think this poem has reached its full potential!

Very sad.. truly. I loved the emotion and heart though. Is it OK if I add you to my favorites? Thanks!

Awww im so sorry if this is true but i love the poem. its really sad. 5/5

HELLO ..!!

Great choice of words ..!!
So touching hun ..!!

I'll be adding a new poems soon, so please returnt the favour =)

[..x..Dead.Roses..Jelz]

Awwwwh so sad

I love all your poems... they are soo good... and this poem was so sad too... its hard loosing a child... :(