Good job Tommy. Keep up the good work. I hope everything is going good for you.

Love ya tons!
Ash

"but aghast what is this?
red light from a far
it is the sun, in all of it's bliss
stretching out its gaze, quickly and hard"

^ hehe. I love that stanza. I love the details in this poem and it flowed very well! Quite an image going on there. Keep it up!

God Bless,
Sarah Joy

I just have to say I luv ur writing. I can relate to it . great job.