Comments : Shaking Cold

  • 17 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Dragging the balde across your arm
    ((blade))

    I liked this....You were like insulting yourself in the beiginning and switched it at the end...The flow was a bit bumpy in my opinion, but other than that I really enjoyed reading it...

    xDarkSuicidex 5.5

  • 17 years ago

    by Weeping Willow

    I know exactly how u feel...ive called the razor my best friend before...and when u get wrapped up in cutting enough...it truely is..u really capture what its like in this poem

  • 17 years ago

    by David

    The last two lines are so so good! they really made the poem excellent! you always need a strong ending. to stay in their minds and make them want more! i love your poems. so so perfect.

    5/5 David

  • 17 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    It's scary how good pain can actually feel at certain times in life, you wouldn't think pain could be such a good thing, but it is 5/5