Again, 4/5 b/c i liked your others much better... but i felt the pain, and some of the stanzas i saw potential in... i thought you might go somewhere with those, take me into it, but you left your reader in the dark, you left them out, didn't bring them deep into your soul shut them out... open the door next time... but i am sorry if this is true, no one should have to suffer that. keep up the poems