Comments : My Love is Raw

  • 17 years ago

    by Judah

    Tis sad,i hope it lasts.

    nice, keep it up.

  • 16 years ago

    by paul alexander

    I like this poem

  • 16 years ago

    by Nuh

    Written with passion
    loved it

  • 15 years ago

    by Nicko

    Good work, conveyed well, good use of rhyme and repetition.

    Cheerz Nicko

  • 15 years ago

    by Oceansoul

    Ah, how sweet is love and how hard is its pain
    nice poem,
    well done
    keep it up :)

  • 15 years ago

    by BlAcK ShAdOw

    NICE POEM... WELL WRITTEN

  • 15 years ago

    by Brad Quammen

    I really like this poem. The way you flow with your words is well written. I enjoyed the first half of this poem most because of the uniqueness I sensed. A great job indeed. 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Andrew

    Nice piece, i like the rhyming scheme and how well your poem flows. Keep up

  • 14 years ago

    by Jay Perry Jr

    You did very good on this poem. I like it 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by CoLliN

    The poem puts me in a state of life happening... i can almost feel a sadness in you that's finally dying... slowly giving way to a happy future for u :)
    loved the poem
    keep em coming