Omg thats fab i love it ur amaizng i cant help it but ur amazing so wonderfull god ur great
xoxroxy

This is awesome u are wonderful writer.Keep up the good work.5/5.
xoxoTashaxoxo

Wow all ur poems actually feel like u ave feelings for the poem! xxx

Good poeming keep writing xxx

Pfft this is better! for then just getting a 3/5 IM RATiNG A 5!

Again, the rhyming was broken, which often kills a poem...And to me, you don't seem to speak from emotion..You just..write.

xDarkSuicidex 4.5

Good job!! i thought it was rather good

Really nice

Really nice