Comments : Promised Land

  • 17 years ago

    by Laura

    Short and sweet but speaks volumes....fantastic write.

  • 17 years ago

    by Tim Fleckney

    Very powerfull and life affirming I loved it from start to finish, excellent use of words it flowed very well and spoke to my heart. I might like to see a few line breaks in thier but that is more of a personal thing . I will be back to read more of your work.
    Tim