The onyl part that ruined the flow of this for me was

I could catch his heart like each before
But no my thinking was so wrong

apart from that it flowed really well and i really enjoyed reading it. Don't worry, there are guys out there that won't make you cry, you'll find em.

Great write. =)

Thats an awsome poem! loved every bit of it! it was very heartfelt and different than the other! you got the talent keep it up!

thanks for the comment on my poems it means alot to me!

Hey hun...first of all, I miss your love poems so much
this poem is absolutely terrific...but I would have loved it even more if it had had a happy ending =( I guess not all love stories have happy endings =)

you have so much talent that wouldn't be compared to anyone on this site...I adore your poems, they always make me feel relieved and inspired...yet very Impressed :$

Thanks for always inspiring me =)
Keep up the beautiful talent
Best Of Luck
NemO x0x0x0x0x0x0x

Omg sarah..loved this one...the flow was awsome......5.5

Wow waht a beautiful poem...very powerful i can relate to this alot.
well written keep it up