Excellent poem i give u a 5/5, u have a good way with words

Wow nice poem! yet so sad to read how the dad treats his daughter!

Omg i really like dis one ive got someone in my family that dranks read some of my other ones if u would

Aww wow. this is really good. is it true? i'm sorry if it is. you did a wonderful job writing it though. so much emotion. flowed wonderfuly. 5/5

~Kristina

Wow! that was amazing. i really really liked this poem. it had such amazing wording and i could sence a lot of emotion. WOW. 5/5

This is really heartfelt. Alcohol kills so many relasionships.