W0W!! I love this poem. The rhyming was good the whole way through. It was extremely sweet and filled with so much emotion. Very descriptive and heartfelt. Excellent job

P.S. don't be sorry about the length of the poem. If it's from your heart...it's never too long

Love described at its very best! this poem is breath-taking! Simply gorgeous!
very well done!

You really like love poems don't you? Lol. This one was good, but I felt there was something missing from it && I couldn't quite point it out. But good job Hunn.

4/5

-Jenna.