Wow I really can relate to this its amazing I love it

Awhh.. That was so sad sweetie.. The flow was better in this one though.. It worked well.. The emotion was very sad and the descriptions were great.. Nicely done! 5/5

Ooo. I liked this a lot. I didn't much like the flow, but I liked the idea of the story type of poem. Good job. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha