Comments : It hurts more than ever

  • 17 years ago

    by Chelsea Sprite

    Pretty good. There were a few spelling mistakes, but hey, everyone makes mistakes. :) Over all, pretty good! Keep on writing! ;)

    ~~Spanish367

  • 17 years ago

    by Alexander

    Its really good poem keep on u have good talent

  • 17 years ago

    by dorky goth girl

    I loved this one! it was really good keep it up!

  • 17 years ago

    by mistressxsork

    Um.. it was.. OK? yeah. well. Better luck next time.

    -Jennifer.

  • 17 years ago

    by The Black Stallion

    I've been in that situation before i know it sucks but things will get better

  • 17 years ago

    by Freak7265

    Good job!...Even if it doesn't rhym it was still good!

  • 17 years ago

    by LoreNz0

    This poem dont have to ryme to b good coz its great!! and really makes sence