Comments : Whats missing

  • 17 years ago

    by TILLmyLASTtearFALLS

    Wow, I know pretty well how you feel, Ive had that question on my head lots of times...Anyway I really liked it, you put down what I had been wondering in an excellent way. The rhyming worked very well too. Keep it up!
    Love,

    TILLmyLASTtearFALLS

  • 17 years ago

    by Cameron

    I really enjoy your poems.

  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    A very nice poem, great emotion into it, you have done a great job like always.5/5