Aww hun that's sooo sad! ack! that sux! I know you probably don't want to hear this, but time will really heal your broken heart..It just takes a little time.

hope you feel better!
MandiexOx

Wow..that was so full of emotions. And shows that u truly r a sweet guy. Great poem. Keep it up;)

DAMN! i wasnt the first one to comment =[ but oh well to the poem!.....it was so amazing but sad! so much emotion there!
it flowed very well! loved the ending! 5/5
And Be strong everything will turn alright i hope!
Take Care
And
Keep Smiling

Much Love
-*- Tormented

I rate this one 100/5 because i know how you feel. of course, i watched a girl take my love away from me instead of a guy. that would've been much worse tho.
keep up the awesome work!!
~maggie

Awwww....im sorry david...she has the same gym period as you??>..hmm...anyways....it was in explicit cuz..it said there were some words in it...idk...and so i jus said F it and put it in explicit....yea...dont worry about d.t.s.i.k....its not important..lol...but good poem

I know exactly how u feel,great poem