Hmm.
Its had a great theme.
The rhythm was a bit scratchy but we have good and bad days.

I like the descriptiveness and all that sh*t
lol
4/5
all in all very pleasing
: )
~Emma

Yes, quite good. i agree with emma that the rhythm was a bit typsy, but i really liked the story lin. i am not sure what it's about exactly.... but the interpretation was interesting... : )
-Suzie
xoxo

Your poems are so different/intresting but in a good way, which makes me love them so much more! 5/5

Holy butt! honestly Im lost for words...(first time ever!)