I loved the whole poem, especially the message, it's so sweet and sincere. I think you could improve it by changing your i's to I's and your u's to you's. It might give the wrong impression to your readers, and it would be a shame because this is a great poem.

The word choice was excellent, I'm not sure about the last line though.

Good job! 5/5

Keep writing.

XoXo
Gaby