This is a good poem that is very well expressed. i could feel a lot of pain in it...
Sometimes my whole body aches
for all the love that is not mine.
I sit and count all my mistakes,
while everyone thinks I'm fine.

i liked that verse because i could relate to it best, it does such a good job of expressing an internal suffering while still smiling on the outside..keep up the good work

~Running from Canada~
Todd

Tha rymed very well wasnt forced wow 5/5