I agree with rach the third stanza is amazing and very well written, you have a good flow throughout and obdviously are gifted when it come to writing

5/5
keep it up
you are now in my favorites
sarah

Wow Michael, you have done another great job, like always deep meaning with perfect word choice, I really enjoyed it and thank you for sharing it,
as always 5/5

A very profound write. A true believer, you are.

The poem was well written and in it comes the answers that we have searched for. The power of Faith.

Keep it up.

Oh, I like the meaning of this a lot. It tells about life. Which isn't exactly what I do best lol. The vocab was excellent, once again, and the flow was marvelous. Great work. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

Hmm, so very very true, and beautifully written too. Thank you for your comments, I really like they way you write. take care

Beutifully written, and very thought provoking.

Smooth and gives your take on the world very nicely. top job :)

Very nicely said... I'm not sure what to say; I can leave novels on other poets posts, but to you there's nothing to say. It's simply perfect.

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