Hey sarah.. this is really wonderful!!!
I love your last stanza and the previous!!

very sad, very heartfelt...very inspiring and greatly written
best of luck
NemO xxxxxxxxxxxx

So good love the last stanza great job 5/5

Very nice, I especially love the last stanza. It rhythm is quite wonderful as well.

I agree with nicole and luna the last stanza is my favorite, this poem is very intense and sad and has great rhythmic qualitys
amazing yet again

keep it up

sarah

Omg this one was the best...the last stanza was really good....5.5 defff.

Awww... thats so sad... sad and true to others... i also feel that way... hope you get over it... be strong! keep expressing yourself!

~angel~

This is soo beutifull i loved it! it was sad, but the flow of the poem! makes the reader to continue and not stop! loved it

keep it up!

OMJeebus! I've felt like this before. I can relate to this so much its not even funny...! I loved this so much. It even made me sad kinda...lol but in a good way...iunno what im saying lol. I just loved it! Take care and God bless,

- Liz

Wow, this poem left me speechless. It's a truly fantastic poem. You're a very talented writer. I love the way you take real things and write about them figuratively...not necessarily this poem but some of your other poems, great work! =)

x.xBrokenx.x