This is a great poem, you are a very talented writer and i envy your talents lol anyway darl
grat poem great work
5/5
superb
sarah

AMAZING so well written i could picture it keep it up!!!!!!!!!!!111

These poems are all amazing....loved them alll...5.5

Very well written. Nice work. I liked this one a lot. I will be looking out for more of your poems.

-Jennifer. Overall Rating: 4.7/5

In this poem you have made your readers to go into the poem and follow each line of it until the end, this poem was very touchy and very well written poem, great job and a 5/5 cause you really do deserve it.

Fabulous, truly amazing. kinda erotic/creepy. gripping and chilling. loved it. 5/5

This poem is so good. It`s kinda erotic, but it`s got it`s chills en all that. Basically, it`s hot. Yur a talented writer. Love it.
..__MiNDYY

Wow!
great vocabulary
the flow was beautiful
it's a tradgic story
and was just breathtaking
i absolutly loved every part.
definitly going under favorites!!

It was very touching! very sad and helped me in a way because i recently found out 1 of my friends had been raped!! you may not understand how it helps me, in a way i dont either but i want 2 thank you because it did!
keep up the good work! i want 2 b able 2 rite lyk u 1 day

This poem is so good, filled with strong emotions! sadness and love at the same time!

Good poem
keep it up!

Good Job

It's awesome... So sad... I hold my breath when I read it... 5/5 You're really good, keep writing!

That was amazing! Bravo! Great writing! So sad and heartfelt. 5/5

Dearest,
Brit

This is really amazing.
you're a good writer
keep it up

Hey thats sad but i like it its realy good

Woahhhhh!! This was just like...CRAZY!! I don't even know what to say, I'm speechless. I loved the way you wrote it, the flow was great, the rhyming was amazing. Everything was just perfect. This poem gave me the chilllls. lol Great job!! 5/5

- Liz