Aww! It's not crappy! It's good! Lol. I really liked it.

Before men's hearts began to [greave]
Correction: grieve as in: to feel grief or great sorrow, and not an armour plate in between the knee and the ankle. >.<

[Your heart does feel burned]
Suggestion: Your heart feels so burned--I think it sounds better, but take it or leave it.

[Shall keep the candle always lit]
Suggestion: Shall keep the candle lit. Extra words aren't needed in shorter lined poems. =)

Other than that, I liked it lol. It had loads of emotion that lots of people can relate to. Great job! =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

"But often love is blind
And mistaken for what's wrong
The fear of losing what you have
The fear of days so long"

"But love is not holding on
Nor is it keeping her near
It is the art of letting go
That tells her she is dear "

Those two were my favorite stanzas. This is a very great poem with good rhymn and flow. I can relate well with those two stanzas the most. Great work! I will read your other poetry since I enjoyed this one very much! =)

Well, well. You like to reference yourself, no? It's very good insight to do such a thing. Love, lust, infatuation. You know what they all have in common? They're feelings. No one seems to get that. They think love is allmighty, all powerful. Love outbeats EVERYTHING and EVERYONE. It's just an emotion.. kayyy? Lol. Sorry. I get carried away. Good debates, yes. Anyway, a lovely job. 4.8/5

I really am loving your poems so far
your very talented and this poem is amazing as well
i loved the second stanza
im adding you to my faves yay