Short sharp and too the point i like it, good job!
keep up the good work!!
tom xx
ps i willtalk toy ou bout my probs if you want but its a long list

This is a good poem, but...we really need to liven you up a bit muh friend. You're sounding alot like I do at times when I'm down...except you've got more organization with your thoughts. Lol.

Nice poem here, very concise.. dark as well.