Another great poem, once again you have showed your great talent. 5/5

Awhh, that was so sad.. The flow was pretty good.. As were the descriptions and the emotion. Nicely done 4/5

Gabby! another good one! YAY! it was so so sad....it flowed really good! another fav. but gabby i love them all! your the best ever...keep up the good work! *10 stars* love ya bunches!
Amber Dawn