That's awesome. I recon swearing a lil helps you push more anger and feeling into it. Well done! :D

You express your feelings exceptionally well throughout this. Lots of anger and hurt. I've written 2 about depression and cutting, from a Moms point of view. I'd appreciate you letting me know what you think. Please ang in there...your life has meaning and purpose, regardless of what's going on around you : )

Wow. This was absolutely terrific. I loved it. I liked how you expressed yourself from your point of view, exactly, and that your mom loved him more than you. I hope it's not true. And if it is, you're not the only one who feels this way. =(

The flow was great, and the anger was...well...angry lol. Great job. I liked the last stanza the best though and how you said the razer was your best friend. Great piece. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

Yeah that was really good. i dont really see why the swear words need d.o.t.t.i.n.g though... you can still tell what they say.. i reckon you should just leave them as they are.

thos poems got a really good ending.. it actually disturbed me.. but like in a good way. if you understand? :P

well keep writing, i like your style.

Sad but good your emotion is soo strong 5/5