Very nice 5/5

That was amazing!! Great job, 5/5

Have you ever thought about being a lyric writer for a band or some sort of musical group? You are fantastic. 5/5

That was excellent, It was very well written, and I especially loved the chorus.. I would love to hear this being sung with music, I think it would make the emotion even stronger.. well done 5/5 xx

Exellent one, very nicely written, another 5/5

Excellent job ! but some of the verse's seem to be unfinished. Over all 5/5