Comments : What if i...would you....

  • 17 years ago

    by yes-i love you

    Wow..that was WAY good. betta than i cod eva rite. hey if you have time mayb you cod check sum of mine out? give me sum tips? great work
    x

  • 17 years ago

    by Poison Ivy

    Let him know!..i know how it feels to wonder and its the worst..excellent poem by the way :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Jay-Jammal

    Beautiful poem i really loved it..keep writting good job! and thank you for your comment.

    Much love from
    Jay-Jammal

  • 16 years ago

    by struggling

    Great..i love it its cute and easy to relate to..5/5
    ~Shareeda