"The rose you threw
My heart it struck"
I love this part the best this is a very good poem i love

Thia poem ia awesome! you're an amazing writer!! 5/5 again

Very sweet poem yet again. Quite long, but still got loads of discription throughtout it. Loads and loads of emotian. OIts really great! One tip is punctuation, i think you should of used it much more then you did. It kinda through me off. Still great poem! Keep them up! xx

Very nice poem reall shows real feeelings,,,
5/5