Bravo, Very well done. I commend you on your style.

The flow was great.

Wonderful... i liked it alot.. its hard to follow rules in writing but you did a great job! :D keep writing!

~angel~

Wow. Ive been trying to write poems with rules dang they are so hard!! So you did such an excellent job.. you really did an awesome job 5/5

~!*FallenTears~!*
~!*Meaghen~!*

She rusts the memories of who you once were.
As your mistress gains your hearts devotion,
She dies like a movie star from your crime

^ I like those lines, I don't know why. I applaud you for being able to write a sonnet lol.. you're talented. Keep it up and I hope all is well with you!

God Bless,
Sarah-Joy xo

A heart so broken - - still beating on with time - -
((I loved these lines...))

I really liked this poem... It was strong and you told such a story so well in format. Great job.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5