So sad, my dear! I hope your ok ((if this is true)) I'm not really sure what to say about this poem, though. It had emotion to it, and honestly although it was not your best write you could tell how much it meant to you. Good job.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

Wow arcane blondie! That was awsom!

Love Niquee
xoxoxoxoxo

I fell in love with this poem at the first line! The wording, rhyming, flow, it's all PERFECT!
Gets the meaning across. 5/5 for sure.

I can't believe how much emotion and realness is in this poem. It makes me want to cry, every word touches me....

WOW that expressed so much pain and emotion, i thought it was very good. 5/5

On the verge of tears... Amazing poem, I seriously think you have talent. Every one of your poems is filled with so much emotion and they all flow so well. I'd have to say though, I think this one is my favorite. I wish my poemS were as yours. Keep up the good work!!! --- ooch =)

**were as GOOD as yours**