This is great i love how u compared it with the cobblestones and u did a great job expressing urself though this good job i love it

keenan

Wow like keenan said great poem I also love the message your trying to put across and the flow was quit well all you have said was very great and very inspiring in such a different way great job

geneross

This was awesome=) great job!

Wow.Awesome poem.Thank you for commenting on one of mine but compared to yours mine is so cliche.Please, keep writing as long as you live!!

Forever and Always,
~*~Camille~*~

Very nice poem like the message alot ...and thanx i am now an active member ..i actually think im in the same club as you well thanx for your help

Awesome poem!5/5