Comments : Age Gracefully

  • 16 years ago

    by Lesbian Natalie

    This is awesome...great job...

  • 15 years ago

    by krysten

    That was great i loved it so much

  • 15 years ago

    by Minkus

    5/5. The ending was probably the strongest part of the poem; it shed light on the fact that you're talking about someone you saw once, fell in love with, and never saw again, and you still think about this person even though you're now married/engaged to someone else--that's what I got from it. A few more specifics, sensory images maybe, about the cabin might help the reader picture a detailed scene; it's a little vague as it is. Even so, good work.