Now normally I stray away from poems with a specific type of poetry in parenthesis, because usually it's some weird word that scares me. Triolet, on the other hand, it sounded sorta pretty. Fortunately I did click it, for that was sooooo cool. You'd probably appreciate a more in depth comment, but I am not all that well-versed in "Triolets", so all I can say is the word choice really appealed to me and painted such a dark,yet beautiful image.

Another great job, you are very talented

This is also wonderful...every poems i read i really all appreciate, coz some have different styles and ur poems also the styles is differ i like it.

Very different. ashes seeping from your eyes...that was a VERY original line. I like that your lines, although in your work may be used over again, I have not seen anywhere else! That's just very nice to see some originality!
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