Hmmm, Very sad, highly emotional (not emo, just emotional). I can see how this is an example of extreme inner pain justified with an outer cause. I love it Dan, i just wish it didn't make me wish u were here.
-Suzie
xox

My god this poem really speaks to me as i know that i have felt this x

Thats so deep but god, reading so many poems about people who cant accept that they live life so they slit their wrists are sooooo desturbing!!! ITS NOT THE END OF THE WORLD. THINGS WILL GET BETTER!!! like god if u want pain JUST KILL URSELF NOW! STOP BRAGGIN!!!

but seriously I felt the emotion in ur poem, u are a really talented writer