Beautiful geese !

by HAMED   Sep 6, 2006


So miserable what i have seen
a war that eats everything green
my heart beats and beats
of that gloomy worlds and heats
why wars ...why tears...
why don't you live in peace ?
life is too short ...
so why don't you spend around beautiful geese !

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  • 15 years ago

    by HAMED

    Yes Kelleyana ,i still have the hope in my dream ...one day there will be peace .

  • 15 years ago

    by kelleyana

    Waw, this touches a very delicate subject that of 'war'. Will there be an end? Well i think this question most people ask, but to be optimist oneday there'll be an end. Maybe it will takes years but thinking of whats going on in our society, it's better off being a dreamer than thinking there will always be astrocities in the world. very well done. keep on writing. it merits 5/5, kel.